Score: 7

"i'm a little late"

submission: Awaken 2: If Only Eye...

date: April 22, 2005

i missed it when you uploaded it but since you were kind enough to reply to my review of ep 1 i thought i would review this one

i still thin the ambianc is very original
graphics could be better ( for exemple the part where they come down the rope is not really smooth)
the music isn't really anything special but it goes well with the flash
i also think that it's going to be hard to do a whole series without any kind of dialogue, wether it's written or voice acted , but if that's your plan and if you can pull it off (hard isn't impossible) that's not a problem

anyway congrats on your daily 5 th, butt that doesn't mean you have to stop here you always need to aim higher

Score: 4

"it's a good start"

submission: DT 1: The Gunslinger

date: April 22, 2005

it's nice to see something where, even if the animation is far from being the best, the author put effort into it

the drawings are nice but the animation wasn't really good
"paint it black" is one of my favorite song so i'll give you credit for that, but the sound FX isn't top notch

i haven't read the book so i was a little lost but i did not consider that when voting

don't be discouraged by the low score, making it past judgment on NG is already a good thing and if you continue to put effort into your work you will improve

Score: 9

"VERY ORIGINAL"

submission: A Men's Room Monologue

date: April 21, 2005

no blood, no fights just good humor

it doesn't have the best graphics but with this type of flash, who cares?
the voice acting was great, it's what made it good , because a flash with the same script and bad VA would have been horrible

i think you can expect a nice weekly award and maybe even monthly

Score: 8

"are you sure you finished it?"

submission: Trix Rabbit Justice Ad

date: April 21, 2005

it was good but it was missing something, you know like an ending telling us that he won't ( or will, you never know) end up getting a bowl of trix, but it was still pretty funny

ah and for people not living in the US , if you don't understand it don't vote

Score: 8

"yep"

submission: Santa Sells Out

date: April 13, 2005

really original i wasn't expecting anything like that
nice way to pass the message though you might want to add some music or FX at the end

and really we laugh about it but we shoundn't be , we're getting there

Score: 10

"totaly random"

submission: Element trailer

date: April 13, 2005

definatly unique, good graphic good song,though i didn't really spot any precise sync with the music

ha yes "pg" probably good that's so funny

i think you're gonna need a lot of imagination if you're going to make a story with this

good luck

Score: 6

"nice idea"

submission: Safe Sex?

date: April 11, 2005

i liked it,well, i liked the script, and looks like tom too

but yeah if you redo the voices t would be way better

Score: 8

"definatly original"

submission: Days Of Our Lamps

date: April 11, 2005

nice to see stuff that has never been done before
this has lots of potential
keep up the work

Score: 9

"storytime"

submission: XIN Session 14

date: April 5, 2005

there's no real action in this one, but this series has become so big it doesn't need action( but if you want some, go to there site and watch session 15 :) )

it's a really nice build up for the next episodes and we learn a lot

a like the fact that you make your own music it makes the series unique

i like some voice actors and i don't like some others but overall it's still good

anyway, good job

Score: 8

"short n sweet"

submission: Schiavo's Secret

date: April 1, 2005

nice funny cartoon

decent animation
basic music sync
really funny

i'd say it's a nice day's work